Year 5 are really lucky to be working with an author this morning called Pie Corbett. Mr. Corbett will be working with us from a conference in Wales where over 100 delegates will be reading your writing.
The rusy gate creaked when peaple walk out its always creaked and I always stop it and some peaple call it the haunted gate and I call it nothing and when I walk out the gate it always creaked and I was shutting the gates and I was getting aheadak and I was opening the gates was creaking everytime then I call my mate was name Lennon then me and Lennon trying to stop the creaking then after that I got the rust then I paint the gate gold then I buy a now gate from B and Q and I put the gate on.
The rusty gate creaked by the old house in Atlantis. People have crystals on there neck’s to protect them and they can use the crystals to fly ship’s and the team who found Atlantis got crystals and got loads of jewellery and gold. Milo the smart one with the brains didn’t go back to earth he stayed with Kira his lovely girl friend his parent’s died when he was 5 years old.His mom was called Molly Thatch and the dad was called Drew thatch then when they died he lived with his uncle his uncle was called William that his uncle died at.
One day I woke up in a boot of a bright,red car with my best mate Ellis with a scar down his lip and then he woke up and he whispered to me that I had the same thing. So I found two balaclavas and gave Ellis one and we put them on and jumped out the boot and grazed our knees. As soon as the car left we saw a big,black forest and we found a the rusty, old gate creaked of death was of reach so we touched it and it creaked really loud and our home appeared, scars disappeared.
When I got home from school I had to go through the gate and the rusty gate creaked because it has been there for 10 mouthes. Then William called for me then we went to my bedroom and watched Manchester United vs wolves the first half it was 2-1 to Manchester United. Then the other half Manchester United won 4-2. Me and William jumped up and started shouting because Manchester United won then we went to call for Elle-j and then we went to go to the park and play football. Then we saw Ellie s then we played football.
Hello my name is Tia and I just moved in to my new house. The next door Nabers hous is really old and the rusty gate creaked it dose it all the time. On the over side of my house know won lives in there it is fore sail. My mom and dad are moving all are stuf in the care
I’m going to take my dog awark. There is a big park and a filed on the over side of my hous
when i went to walk I herd the gate move. the old ladey came out and stroked my dog.
Today I had gone to a park. Me and my family went had a walk around this colossal park we then found a spot in the park to have a picnic. After a few minutes I heard this creak I went towards this gate. It was very rusty and battered then the wind blow and the rusty gate creaked when the wind blasted it open. Then I walked in while the door was still open from the wind blowing it. When I got though the door I saw this perfect garden so I asked my parents to go to the same park.
I was walking to my friends house and when I went to open the gate and when I went to open the gate, the rusty gate creaked I thought in my head it needs some oil. I kept on walking through the gate. I knocked on the door I heard him racing down the stairs when Rhion opened the door he asked me if I wanted to go to the park. I answered him and replied “yes I’ll come”. After that we went to the park on our scooters, when we got there we met our other friends William, Lennon and Drew, Bradley, Ellie.
I was in my room watching the cup final, England vs Germany. Wayne Rooney just scored to make it 4-2, then I heard a knock on the door as I opened the door Drew stood there wearing an England hat and scarf I went to shut the gate. The rusty gate creaked when I went inside, we watched the match and it was 4-4 then all of a sudden Steven Gerrard got tackled. It lead to a penalty, Wayne Rooney took a long run up and shot with all his might, and scored the winning goal me and Drew cheered in happiness.
On a sandy Greek Island where the sparkling water roamed around it and a beautiful gold Greek palace lay. The sun blazed down on a patch of flowers and fields. Boats bobbed out on the ocean where there were enormous fish that always got caught. It was a peaceful Island but there was a grey cloud that looked like a storm was coming.
Oliz’s parents were very poor he had to look after the animals on the Island. He really loved animals and his favourite one was the horse. It was called Epona she also was a very sweet horse. Epona loved her owner and loved to go for rides. One day Oliz was taking Epona for a ride then suddenly he saw something shiny hidden in the long tall grass. He went to see what it was. He got of his horse it was a monumental master sword and a shiny Hylian shield. Oliz was surprised he carefully put them on his back home he heard that a shadow beast roamed around the kings palace Oliz ‘s parents wondered where he got the sword and shield from.
The beasts body was covered in a poisonous liquid. His head was covered in spikes as prickly as a spiked plank. He was like a charging bull. Huge claws looked as if they were a dinosaurs tooth. His eyes were as red as cherries.
Later that day Oliz started his journey to find the shadow beast he told his parents. Oliz got on Epona and rode to the beasts cavern. Cautiously Oliz stopped he saw a boy with a bomb in his hands Oliz quickly got Epona and stopped the boy. The boys name was Ganon. Oliz asked for some bombs. Ganon said yes he could have them. Oliz got them and got on Epona and rode on his way to the beasts dark, gloomy cavern. Oliz was nearly there he was tired Oliz knew he couldn’t go back home. Oliz was at the he got of Epona and went inside he had to watch out for traps while searching for the beast. Oliz had to look out for traps while on the way for the search.
A while later Oliz found the beast sleeping on his rocky slab. Silently he raised his sword above his head. Suddenly the beast woke up and saw the sword in Oliz’s hand and growled at him. He realised that the beast was terrified. Oliz put the sword back in to it’s shiver and decided to befriend the beast. He realised the beast was lonely, so he decided to tell him all about the the dark, gloomy swamp the beast really wanted to go there so they did.
The beast followed Oliz to his new cave by the swamp. When they got there the beast went onto his new home the beast went to sleep again on his new slab. Oliz went home and everyone was in the house with the lights off Oliz turned them on when they came on he was surprised because everyone was there. A few minutes later the part was over and Oliz had to go to bed he would never forget that day.
Today Year Five are building dinosaurs with stencils. They have the parts for the dinosaurs to make and it is their job to put them together!
Today I went to the beach. After a few hours we got to the beach and my dad parked next to some bins I got out and I had some rubbish. I put it in the and I had been taken to this planet. I did not like it and I had a bit of rubbish I put in in some bins and it did not let me go home so I kept walking. I saw so of the same bins I put rubbish in the bin and I took me back were I went to swimming in the sea.
One day me and Ellis was going to the north to the gold, smooth beach. As soon as we got there we was on YouTube accounts called my name is lenvsminecraft and Ellis name was realvsminecraft and we was making a video. But there was a mini light on a recycle bin and it opened and it was a dwarf coming out of a elevator. So me and Ellis snook in there it was a bit of a squeeze. But we fell down and fell in a deep mine that there was dwarfs yes dwarfs we filmed then 1,00000000 subscribers.
Dear diary, I’m so happy I’m going to the beach! I don’t know what to say I’ll wright back soon! Dear diary, we’re there! Me, my mom, my dad and my little brother are at the beach the one thing is that there’s these weird recycling bins they look like a tiny house these ovals that look like doors. After that, I went to paddle in the sea and built some sandcastles. When I finished one, a little crab moved in. I made ten before lunch, we had hotdogs. Sadly we only went for one day but it was fun.
The beach is sunny there is six bins on the path and the green over the back of the beach there is mountains you can go on the boats and you can go in the water and there is seagulls and there is some clouds and a beach there is crapes and on the beach you can ride on donkeys and there is lots of shops and lots of trains and measume and its free to go in there and there is lots of birds and boats and lots of birds and lots of trains and more of donkeys.
On a Saturday morning we went to a beach up North. We travelled by aeroplane to get to the beach, it was very very far to get to the North. While I was in the car I played on my iPad. My mom gave me and my brothers and my dad a sandwich and a packet of crisps it was yummy, my favourite crisps are Worcester sauce they are my favourite. The travelling took a long time so I decided to go to sleep for an hour. As soon as I got there their was six recycling bins.
When I went to the seaside I am going on the yellow beach, suddenly I saw a bin with, holes in the bin ,then I went to put some rubbish in the bin. Then I herd a noise it was a man in a bin ,then the man said I am hiding from a man he is looking for us because, I kicked the ball at his window and smashed it ,and my football is popped in the house. He was chasing us round the streets and then I had to go through a back garden it was not fun.
It was the day that we was going on holiday to the beach so I was on the beach and I went to trow away my sweets and then I sean this thing and it open so I went in it. then I got out of it. So then I were in a make up place and clothes place it was my dream to me in one of this thing and i was thinking I must be in a dream.So I looked at them and then this Women she gave me make up and clothes so I went back.
One sunny day I got up and went downstairs to have some thing to eat. I went to the beach with my friends we went in the sea and had a ice cream. We saw this bin and there was a door on one of them. I opened it and went inside and I ended up in a party in a mansion. Inside it was so gargantuan. It was so much fun I wanted to stay there longer but I had to get back for bed time. When I got back I went up stairs and went to bed.
Water on the cliff
Dropping down by the rainbow
It was beautiful.
Icicles hanging down
On the cliff that are hanging
By the blue ice water
Where the waves splash by the sea
Where the snow always falls down.
Snow is really beautiful
It was really gleaming on trees
Snow is really beautiful